quick smiles.
awry glances.
handshakes.
awry glances.
handshakes.
skipped heartbeats.
long drawn steps down a brick laid path.
monosyllables hanging in the air.
faded lights.
resounding drumbeats!
festivities in the air.
and....
guitar strains in my head.
festivities in the air.
and....
guitar strains in my head.
we walked.(..in perfect rythm)
[a light breeze
and the smell of shimul]
bliss.
12 comments:
so it goes... but don't attempt versification so early...
BTW, was this a kobita? baapre!
:)
na.
ekdom kobita na.
kobita.ami?
ekdom i jome na bepar ta..
ki exactly ami nijei jani na.likhte bhison ichcha korchilo..r.prothom blog niye khub uttejito chilam tai ekta otisdharon 1 minute er haantar kotha likhe fellum...
oi shomoy ..oi likhtei ichha korchilo!
thank u for ur suggestion..
dite theko jodio koto frequently post korbo ke jane..
but jaihok..
keu to amar blog ta porlo..
bhalo laglo!
by the way..
wat was d bapre for?..d experimental post or is the lekha baje n dats y u said so...
forget the "baapre", I withdraw it...
:)
Let me explain, the smiley followed to express a good-natured grin, not to laugh at you...
Likhte likhtei manush shekhe. And I'm no one to judge. To be precise, no one is, but yourself. The important thing is to keep going...
abol tabol{take dat as a compliment}.....hijibiji,tui ke?
in all probability you don't know me personally...
i'm just a random reader called hijibijbij :)
@ hijibijbij..
Thank u!
dat ws encouraging!
heyyyyaaa--------welll--sounds lyk u have tried ur hand at a poem or sumthin.....hmmmm....well---didnt turn out dat rhythmic..but i must admit....it has got an eerie feeling to it--wateva it is....it sounds mysterious.....hmmm..a nice little walk....reminds me much of "A walk byMoonlight" by Derozio (in our isc syllabus; and im in 11)...and in awl probability...u read in cghs..klass 11???
@the shadow of the grim.
no i did not try to wirte a poem..
if u had read the earlier comments ud understand...
random ramblins.u cud call it.
yaah--ssaw da oder poshtsh....hmmm...den itsh quite gud u kno..told ya abt dah eerie feeling it gibsh!!!!:-).......yepp!!! datsh da truth!!
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